You were recently impressed by a staff member at a supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: Describe the situation
Explain how you were helped
State what you are going to do as a result of this good experience
Dear Sir/madam,
I am writing to express my gratitude towards the helpful nature of the staff Mr John at the wall street store.
They helped me find my misplaced bag, had not been your employees, It would have been huge struggle and loss of time to me.
As I am new to this city and here for a business meeting, yesterday evening I came to your supermarket directly form a meeting to purchase few snacks items. In the process of which I misplaced my bag and was not able to find it. The bag contained my companies Laptop, hotel roomkeys and my wallet containing my debit card and driving lisence. John at lost and found department helped me recover my bag which lying unattended.
Thus, to show my sincerely gratitude. The least I can do is to give your store a 5 star rating and appreciation review, as I am an well followed tarvel guide on google,
Yours Sincerely,
Abhishek Agrawal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... huge struggle and loss of time to me. As I am new to this city and here for a ...
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...or a business meeting, yesterday evening I came to your supermarket directly form...
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...recover my bag which lying unattended. Thus, to show my sincerely gratitude. Th...
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...rating and appreciation review, as I am an well followed tarvel guide on google, ...
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... well followed tarvel guide on google, Yours Sincerely, Abhishek Agrawal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59627329193 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6068760291 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689440993789 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8626847562 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0852028763734 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358651924107 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310851810223 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526084494002 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222966050085 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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