Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.?
Although, such topics will lead to consensual agreement, a dialog on "Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers, others believe that a woman's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children" will lead to thought-provoking discussion. my view is that irrespective of numerous agreement that exist on either side, women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Through the course of this essay, i shall explain my point of view by considering both the sides of the arguments.
Womens are not born, only for doing only household chores and taking care of children. They have equal rights, strength and knowledge same as men. THey should also be given equal rights same as men in their career. Their is also a government law passed in the 1907 for the equality in the wages for women.
Now a days women's are flourishing in all the fields such as pilots, defence , cattering,software, hardware, etc., For example First Indian astranout to space in women,
First Metro pilot in chennai in women and their are lot of successful women entreprenours
throught the world. Now a days there is a thought explored in all the industries, such as
women has a very good consistency and patience to explore in all the fields.
I see that there is a potential evidence to support the argument i have provided, and
hence, my opinion is that women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their career. I am inclined to believe that women will flourish in the current technological world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84926470588 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80112742611 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518382352941 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.670084185 50.4703680194 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.909090909 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.12807881773 194% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405358735472 0.242375264174 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148443212688 0.0925447433944 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135865766062 0.071462118173 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137007635809 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149171048983 0.0609392437508 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.