Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime while others believe
that there are alternative ways to decrease crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is considered by some that a sustainable way to reduce crimes rates is increased the sentences years, while there are
others who think it is not necessary.
I personally believe that laws and regulations should protect our citizens from crimes by imposing rigid long sentences if it is
necessary. This essay will discuss both sides, using examples
from Queensland University and BBC news to demonstrate points and prove arguments.
On the one hand, there is ample evidence in favour of increasing the numbers of years in prison will deter crimes, violence
and robbery. Living in a complex society poses several challenges to our public justice system where individuals seek to live
in harmony and peace.
For example, recent empirical research Queensland University suggested that 20% of crime rates in Singapore has
reduced drastically as a result of rigid laws and regulation,.
Therefore, It is conclusively clear that regardless of the type of crime, residents should obey the law in order to avoid being
in prison for many years.
On the other hand, although there is a case for increasing the numbers of years in prison brings positive security aspects
to society, the overpopulation rate in prisons cannot be overstated.
There is a concern of the population growth in public prisons where governments allocate more funds and resources to
handle this problem. An alternative approach for reducing crimes is to impose a hefty fine and humanity work to people who
commit minor crimes such as petty crimes.
For example, an article published by BBC News showed that in Malaysia , the number of crime rate has substantially
decreased since the increased in penalties and fines.
Consequently, it is possible to state beyond doubt that it is not necessary to impose harsh sentences in all types of crimes,
Local governments could determine what types of offences can be handled with humanity work and fines
To conclude from the examples and arguments given I firmly believe that rigid laws and regulations will help to reduce the
numbers of crimes and long sentences should be used appropriately and controlled by responsible authorities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25862068966 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84065016423 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557471264368 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.8009776571 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.5 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226718305552 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793223000935 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610777319057 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0559173632094 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528573405615 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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