Some people believe that the media has a strong impact on people’s lives, others feel that is a politician who has the most control over the way people live.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is human’s nature of any individual that he spends life whatever he observes or taught by people. While some feel that the politician’s way of living is more adopted, I, however, firmly believe that media is playing more role in this regard.
On the one hand, the reason why minor copy the politician's way of living is distinctive lifestyle . The supporter of the politician’s life argue that their apparent style of living is much impressive than else one. Also, they have every single facility of life such as wealth and status. Moreover, they govern other people’s lives because in many countries politicians make government policies, which are implemented on ordinary people later. Thus, many wish to be a politician but everybody cannot become a political leader. Similarly, to be a politician demands great struggle and activeness which everyone has not.
On the other hand, I side with those who believe that media is the best factor which compels us how to live. Admittedly, media shows us such living styles which entirely rely on real lives. The major source of media are TV, movies and social sites, reflecting both sides of life: therefore, such ways are applicable to every life and not specific that you must be a politician to have a good life. Furthermore, the life standards told by media do not rely on one category of people whom they show that they are successful whereas media takes stories from all fields of life and provides them life pattern according to their need. Hence, the media is the enormous source which gives a platform to people how to live with.
In conclusion, although spending life like a politician seems attractive, the ways of living which media tells are more reliable and applicable to everyone. As result of this, on balance, I believe that media is the far more influential way on people’s lives instead political one
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s way of living is distinctive lifestyle . The supporter of the politician’s life ...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun wish seems to be countable; consider using: 'many wishes'.
Suggestion: many wishes
...emented on ordinary people later. Thus, many wish to be a politician but everybody cannot...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and activeness which everyone has not. On the other hand, I side with those who...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94952681388 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64906265118 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574132492114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3916291842 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327642136085 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116260440167 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836225413788 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206136716599 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394917730676 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s way of living is distinctive lifestyle . The supporter of the politician’s life ...
^^
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun wish seems to be countable; consider using: 'many wishes'.
Suggestion: many wishes
...emented on ordinary people later. Thus, many wish to be a politician but everybody cannot...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and activeness which everyone has not. On the other hand, I side with those who...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94952681388 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64906265118 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574132492114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3916291842 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327642136085 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116260440167 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836225413788 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206136716599 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394917730676 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.