Nowadays, there is a trend that the media focuses on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree?
Media plays a critical role in the development of society by propagating the news. Although some people think that negative I somewhat disagree with it because Otherwise, the news that reflects the heinous crimes or carnage can distress readers that could make them temporarily abnormal. Conversely, the positive news has the power to keep society free from outrageous activities and indifferences between diverse communities. Hence, it would keep the unity between people intact.
Nevertheless, For instance, problematic news such as changes in the rules and regulation requires reporting of in-depth detailing of new laws. This is important to avoid the spread of unwanted rumours that could risk the nation-wide public protest. News is destructive to individuals and society, without news transparency, it could lead to the development of security issue regardless of the fact whether the news is negative or positive. The positive news is crucial to keep the emotions of the people under control and enhance their daily activities. The role of media is not just limited to only broadcasting positive news as it must maintain the accountability and transparency to the general public.
Additionally, At times, the threat of natural disaster can cause widespread damage to public properties and even life. For example, in some emergency situation like the potential risk of cyclone or tsunami, every civilian has to be made aware about the likelihood of the affected areas in order to let them plan their travelling or make necessary safety precaution arrangement.
To conclude, while the public has the right to be informed about the uncertain situations that could give
rise to a personal safety issue. The positive news certainly has influence over to keep the individuals and society free from unfavourable behavioural situations, I think the dissemination of problematic and emergency news also becomes a significant part to update public, who could otherwise become an easy target of rumour and unforeseen circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, hence, if, nevertheless, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44303797468 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04529050564 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1951632717 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.307692308 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116351164255 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417835761434 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418572495935 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0599146775935 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398914200032 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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