Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The indisriminate use of natural resources such as petrol and diesel, as well as involving in other harmful activities, contribute directly to environmet degration. It has been observed and environment pollution is a matter of greater concer for every nation. This essay will discuss the the ways in which humans are involved in polluting the environment. This essay will further discuss the steps taken by governments and every citizen to curb these issues.
The reasons for increase in environment pollutants are excessive waste disposal together with air pollution because of increase in the number of vehicles on roads. With the burgeoning in the population, large heaps of household waste and hazardous factory waste is seen on side of roads and in rivers, thus contaminating water and air together with increase in contagious diseases. Furthermore, the incremental use of private vehicals for travelling causes the combustion of petrol, resulting in emmiting green house gases such as nitrogen oxide and carbon monoxide in air. This causes main health and breathing issues for the society. To elucidate, acording to the reent report, India is reported as the most polluted country aused by its inhabitants.
It is the responsibility of government to play a pivotal role in reducing the pollution levels affecting people and their surrounding.People should be motivated by governemnt to undertake environment friendly activities such as planting more trees, not using plastic, avoid throwing waste in waster bodies by giving them various tax rebates as well as monetar and non-moetary incentives.
Apart from the governments it is also the duty of every individual to protect the nature. By adoptig waste management techniques that is the 3Rs: recycle, reuse and reduce, the quantity of waste disposal will decrease. Addtionally, people should avoid the use of private vehicles and travel to places by public transport. This will reduce the amount of pollutants in air, eventually prteting the climate. To exemplify, Japan has adopted the waste management technique so efficiently, that they are able to create a clean country.
In conclusion, the major cause on environment deterioration is throwing of waste and increased use of cars and private motors. Its is the role of government and each people to take protect the environment by adopting environment friendly activities.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...r every nation. This essay will discuss the the ways in which humans are involved in po...
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Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...r every nation. This essay will discuss the the ways in which humans are involved in po...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
... affecting people and their surrounding.People should be motivated by governemnt to un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40750670241 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02799317662 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554959785523 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3075712324 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.647058824 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982608232504 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341319770063 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330142317138 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594304568307 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178935132846 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...r every nation. This essay will discuss the the ways in which humans are involved in po...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...r every nation. This essay will discuss the the ways in which humans are involved in po...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
... affecting people and their surrounding.People should be motivated by governemnt to un...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40750670241 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02799317662 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554959785523 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3075712324 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.647058824 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982608232504 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341319770063 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330142317138 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594304568307 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178935132846 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.