Nowadays individuals take their with them to abroad whenever they go on business trip. Advantages & disadvantages
Travelling for business purposes are ubiquitous. While travelling for such meetings most individuals prefer to have their family together with them. Although this trend helps to escalate their family bonding, it will adversely affect the career of the partner and children. In this essay, I will explain the merits and demerits of this practice.
On the one hand, official business trips together with family members help to improve relationships. In my view, while travelling along with family members it allows business personnel to allocate more time with them which increase love and affection. Although it may seem counterintuitive, it is evident in our society because the crucial reason behind divorced families is the lack of time they spend with their loved ones. In addition to family bonding, this combat business-related tension, stress and anxiety. Communication with parents, life partner and children curtail the amount of stress they confront as a result of their hectic business schedule.
On the other hand, frequent travelling along with the family affects the career growth of life partner and children. In other words, continuous travel will affect the job and education because they will not be able to focus on their duties. If children miss their daily classes, it will have serious ramifications in their academics. Moreover, the daunting expenditures of such trips can lead to financial instability. Travelling along with family is expensive because of the exorbitant prices of travel tickets, accommodation and food which will be an overburden.
Although businessmen will have a significant positive impact on both personal and family relationships of businessmen will be enriched by such trips, financial liabilities and future of counterparts will be negatively affected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, as a result, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53429602888 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94916462309 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545126353791 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0996777508 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184805209586 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734185781304 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051561527249 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11021083032 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775460849537 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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