You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-Thanks your friend for the holiday
-Explain that you left your wallet in their house
-give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Hana,
I am writing with utmost pleasure that the holiday spent with you was marvellous. however, I am writing this letter to explain you that I forgot my wallet on the side drawer of your room in hassle.
I can't get over the last week which spent with you as everyday was full of fun and excitement. the drive to Chandigarh was the best start of our holiday as you are that I am highly fond of long drives. then, the lunch at theme restaurant, haveli, was cherry on the cake as I could taste a different cuisine of your state. even, my husband was praising the food yesterday as well. moreover, we surprised of the fact that you have arranged a table in a lounge where there was provision of live music. I can't explain you how soothing it was as the band was skilful in their work. overall, this was the most memorable holiday of my life after ages.
Getting back to my wallet, when we came back to your home late night, I was quite tired and sleepy, thus, could not put my belonging properly. in that scenario, I kept my wallet in the side drawer of your guest room in half sleep. although I packed my all things in the morning, I could not recall that I am forgetting my wallet. the wallet in really urgent as it consists of my cards and most importantly, the driving license without which I can not drive to work. so it is a humble request that handover this wallet to my cousin who resides in your city as she is coming to meet me tomorrow.
I will be highly grateful for this act of kindness
best regards,
mani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... holiday spent with you was marvellous. however, I am writing this letter to explain yo...
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Line 4, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ide drawer of your room in hassle. I cant get over the last week which spent wit...
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Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... I cant get over the last week which spent with you as everyday was full of f...
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Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... the last week which spent with you as everyday was full of fun and excitement. the dri...
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Suggestion: The
...veryday was full of fun and excitement. the drive to Chandigarh was the best start ...
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Suggestion: Then
...e that I am highly fond of long drives. then, the lunch at theme restaurant, haveli,...
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Suggestion: Even
...aste a different cuisine of your state. even, my husband was praising the food yeste...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...as praising the food yesterday as well. moreover, we surprised of the fact that you have...
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Line 4, column 503, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...re there was provision of live music. I cant explain you how soothing it was as the ...
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Suggestion: Overall
... as the band was skilful in their work. overall, this was the most memorable holiday of...
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Suggestion: In
...s, could not put my belonging properly. in that scenario, I kept my wallet in the ...
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Suggestion: Although
...rawer of your guest room in half sleep. although I packed my all things in the morning, ...
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Suggestion: The
... recall that I am forgetting my wallet. the wallet in really urgent as it consists ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... without which I can not drive to work. so it is a humble request that handover th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, so, then, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 290.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30344827586 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29245777791 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548275862069 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7867348036 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.2 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276441609021 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968452712764 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731129493658 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172225174986 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119300827645 0.0580467560999 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.