You just finished a invitation at your friend's home,you found your watch lost when you were back home and it should be lost in your friend's home. wrie a letter to your friend,
1.Thank you for his/her invitation
2.explain about your watch
3.you hope his/her how to do.
write a letter to your friend.
My dear Coco,
How are you doing these days. My work keeps me so busy until now that I never have a time to drop you a line to thank you and your family's BBQ invitation happened on last weekend at your lovely home.
That was how a wonderful memory. Sunny day, gentle breeze, delicious foods and nice friends talking about the recently changes. In the meanwhile, Kids played swings, hide and seek etc in the playground. It is really appreciate that your family brough us an unforgotable hours.
Another thing is that I guess I lost my watch at your home. As what I remembered that I got rid of my watch before I prepared the BBQ foods in the kitchen. My watch is red color with many cystals in the hand belts.
Do you mind to find out if it is in your home, expecially in the kitchen or the back yard. Please give me a phone to update whatever you find.
Thanks for your invitation again and I am waiting for your phone.
With love,
Tracy
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That was how a wonderful memory.
That was a wonderful memory.
Sentence: It is really appreciate that your family brough us an unforgotable hours.
Error: unforgotable Suggestion: unforgettable
Error: brough Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: My watch is red color with many cystals in the hand belts.
Error: cystals Suggestion: crystals
Sentence: Do you mind to find out if it is in your home, expecially in the kitchen or the back yard.
Error: expecially Suggestion: especially
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 179 200
No. of Characters: 735 1000
No. of Different Words: 121 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.658 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.106 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.191 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 37 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 24 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 15 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.786 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.984 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.325 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.705 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.15 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4