Modern cultures around the world have become similar when compared to the past. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?
In recent years, many nations have adopted similar culture as a result of Globalization. It is mainly because of technological breakthroughs, which have emerged around two decades ago and waved the way for international communication. It is a negative change, in my opinion, for certain reasons.
To begin with, the prime causative factor for this trend is the groundbreaking advancements in technology, such as the internet. This innovation has not only enabled boundless connections amongst people from different nations but also provided a platform to disseminate their views and traditional values across. For instance, Social media websites such as Facebook and Twitter, are open platforms, where people can put forward their insights on the various social and economical topics freely. Thus, this has resulted in many nations to attain homogenous communal and cultural thoughts.
I believed that this trend seems to have a few untoward repercussions. As people are adopting a blended culture and behaviour due to the above-mentioned factors, many countries have become a victim of vanished native heritage. For example, in India, while in the past when most people used to live in an extended family and, share love and support, in modern India, nuclear families are more popular, which undoubtedly is the influence of the western lifestyle. If this inclination is continuing to be there in our society, in the coming years, there will no sign of a particular nation's history and historical values.
In conclusion, while modern lifestyle and cultural behaviour are becoming similar as a result of cyber-space, i assume that it has uprooted historical customs and way of living for many nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40298507463 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0589824419 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8306537357 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158452339021 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555706042634 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490093460124 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103584137729 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525139160527 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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