People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The way men and women purchase something is most likely to depend on their age and specific needs at that point in time rather than other elements such as income, quality of the product. I agree with this notion because of the fact that the shopping patterns differ from youngsters to middle age groups to elders. While thinking pattern is one reason, other is society influence.
Our brains mature and behavioral patterns change as we age. People aged below 20 are mostly dependent on parents and do not understand the sense of earning or saving. So, teenagers shell out mostly on aesthetics and clothes whereas elders like to spend limited on these and divert more towards savings and investments. Though income levels of an individual might contribute to what they buy and what they spend most on, age actually influences the behavior.
In addition to this, we tend to be in relevance with similar age group in the society. It’s a common fact that youngsters even with budget constraints buy cheaper clothes, shoes or gadgets they are interested in. TRENDS journal conducted a survey in which they approached people from diverse age groups and questioned what would they buy if they were given 500 $, 96% of the young people said clothes from luxury brands and 92% of the 40-60 group opted to purchase household groceries or mutual funds . These finding corroborated the fact that age is a pivotal factor in shopping habits.
To conclude, age is the most impending characteristic than any other in shopping habits due to the changes it instills in thinking styles and society influences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, still, whereas, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9776119403 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54053557103 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634328358209 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3979856176 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340958160703 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105600036631 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574827730528 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188063738739 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160125197051 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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