The charts below give information on UK spending habits for books bought over the internet .
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The chart gives information about money that spend on internet books in the united kingdom.
The graph shows that money spend on books is rising significantly ,people spent almost 10 million on 1997 while others spent almost 20 million on 1999.That means that the percentage doubled through only 2 years. After this period ;starting from 1999till 2002 the rising went steadily (slightly)by almost only 5 percent ;it appears from the money spent during this period that it went from 20 million up to 25 million.
The other chart shows that the percentage of people who spend money on books comparing between four states in the country , they found it as follow. People who live in England recorded the first highest segment with81% of the total while the second highest segment 3 recorded only 10% of the total. Where as the third and fourth segment recorded 8% and 1% of the total .
In conclusion , the first chart shows that the money spent on internet books during 1997 till 1999 has doubled , while during the period from1999 till 2002 has went up steadily . The second chart shows that the highest rate found in England which scored 81% of the states where people money on internet books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, third, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9068627451 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17752242262 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495098039216 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4045092792 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.125 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119945534182 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767175876748 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903921321649 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118511804383 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10927710092 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.