The diagram shows the process by which sheep embryos are cloned Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The diagram shows the process by which sheep embryos are cloned.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The picture provides formation about how goat embryos are cloned.
Overall, it can be seen that the process by which the sheep embryos are cloned is a multi-step, liner process which consists of three stages: taken the cells, combing them and pregnancy and birth.
In the first stage cell of female cheep A is taken to make the extraction of DNA which is really tiny and complicated. In the same time another adult female sheep from which egg cell is taken. After that the cell egg is taken into process to remove the nucleus from it.
In stage two where the DNA that come from sheep A is fused with the egg cell of sheep B to make one compound. This resulted compound is developed into the wanted embryos then it planted in foster mother uterus. In the last stage, after few months of pregnancy, the mother sheep give birth of the baby sheep which called (lamp) that is cloned of sheep A.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ale sheep from which egg cell is taken. After that the cell egg is taken into process...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, really, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46625766871 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11906138833 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552147239264 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3265963726 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223083133852 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950757639663 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679292043202 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133408554606 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712097074854 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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