Dear John,
The rent increased notice has been received, however, I do have some concerns that I have to bring it to you.
Firstly, the conditions of house itself is getting older and I asked you few time to maintain it, such as the bathroom and kitchen, but all the facilities are good to use as your responsed us so I accepted that. Secondly, the deck has been being weak for a long time and some deck board broken already, that is the reason my partner and I never ever allow our 6 years boy playing on the deck, it makes me feel so upset because he keen to that.
We could stay here if you can change the facilities in the bathroom, repaint the kitchen and change the new deck I would like to accept the new rent from next month, otherwise we do not have choice but have to find new place to live.
I am looking forward to from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...itself is getting older and I asked you few time to maintain it, such as the bathroom an...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e we do not have choice but have to find new place to live. I am looking forwa...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2754491018 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17022708904 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670658682635 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.4665661893 44.8134815571 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 16.8248392259 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 4.34317383033 265% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155844643146 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799532401476 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613474524755 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905481293072 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732051887334 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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