Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People throughout the both developing and developed countries have debated whether the advent of sophisticated modern technology such as mobile phones, iPad and laptops have helped child to enhance and improve reading skills or whether reading from paper is the better option, especially for child. Personally, I advocate the later view. This essay will discuss both sides with examples to demonstrate points and prove arguments.
On the one hand there is ample evidence that web based study can be detrimental especially for young generation who are more likely to get distracted by other online games and sites. With this they won’t be able to concentrate much on reading material, however sitting in front of computer screen for log duration may have several mental and physical side effects. For example, recent scientific research by India government demonstrated that up to 2 years of age kids shouldn’t be shown any of the gadgets as later on it may cause many health problems.
On the other hand, reading through books and paper is cheap and affordable as low income parents need not to spend hard earned money on costly gadgets and hefty internet bills. Additionally, printed material is helpful in all those areas where electricity and internet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 612, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...chnology to students earlier than it is absolutely necessary. For instance, reading from books has ...
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Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ly cause these health hazards. In my personal opinion, a pragmatic rather than a hard-nosed a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, second, so, while, except for, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14925373134 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80624641384 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588059701493 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5786789565 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337491700092 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981271931982 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653062803358 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187814952582 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363621448141 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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