Due to so many young people dropping out from schools, the rate of unemployment is increasing and it affects our society in different ways.
In your opinion, how can this situation be improved?
Students are least interested in studies these days. Now a days a lot of youngsters are dropping out from school and colleges, because of which unemployment rate is getting bigger. Societies is getting affecting because of the increase in illiteracy among young people. This essay will show the problem occurring because of current scenario and the solution which can apply to improve this.
Every human being want to have a better future with good lifestyle and better future with well paid job. But every denizen can not afford the education to get a high paid job in future. That is most lucrative reason of dropping out educations. Plethora of students are dropping out from schools or universities because they are not able to afford expensice studies. Which is the main reason of unemployment rate is getting higher these days. In order to resolve this situation, Government need to take some serious steps. Education must be free of cost as its every person rights. For instance, in Canada literacy rate it 95%, because till 18 year of age education is totally free.
Second reason is every student have their own interest and some students are not good at every subjects. Although they outperform in their favorite subject, they can fail in other which they don't like. Even Some students are good at sports as well but no in academics. Parents and teacher have to understand, every students is not an Albert Einstein. They need to motivate their children and discuss with them about their interests Teacher need to support children, if they are failing in any subject. If they get more and more helping environment, then they will continue their studies.
To recapitulate, with the help of family, teacher and government, we can decrease the rate of dropping out of students and the employment rate will increase simultaneously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Nowadays
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, then, well, even so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01302931596 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60279950195 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537459283388 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9419973857 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1578947368 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84210526316 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173415151256 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570367124182 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613354184309 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134108779465 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817843733907 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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