In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
The soar in population has given rise to construct homes in the rural area as there are limited spaces available to build homes in urban areas. There are people who believe it is vital to defend such places by not constructing the new apartments. This essay will explore, the benefits of improving the countryside.
To begin with, the rural area should be developed by providing hospitals, colleges, and other facilities that are available in town. For instance, by providing schooling facilities, colleges, and basic facilities in such places will encourage people not to relocate to the urban place for their self-development, due to which it will not overcrowd cities. Besides, it will welcome new opportunities in the countryside.
Secondly, the factors have to be considered before developing. The neighborhood has greenery which makes people feel peace of mind by looking at, furthermore, the farmers get daily bread and butter by farming. People visit their native place in their free time so that they can breathe fresh air, and consume nutritious food, whereas, in a city, the pollution level has been increased and we get contaminated foodstuff. For instance, the food which people eat over is from the farm which is fresh from the farm and not contaminated. Due to non-contamination, the food resists its nutritions.
On the other hand, the government should lay strict rules to protect the countryside from pollution and other hazards. Authorities should take certain measures to develop the countryside like cities, but still, retain their natural beauty.
In conclusion, the growing population has given rise to the development of apartments in the rural area, however, developing such places have to execute without harming nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11715481172 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0148352577 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577405857741 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0333650111 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.181818182 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127896420104 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481976978884 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466198720414 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813489927111 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522861653909 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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