Advertising discourages us from being different individuals by making us all want to be and to look the same.
In today's globalized urbanised and the over-populated world, more and more individuals are purchasing own choice of things from supermarkets and online with the help of advertisement. It has been suggested that advertisement make life easier than in the past. I partially agree with the idea, and In this essay I will provide some contentious argument in favour to support my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, perhaps the most compelling reason why advert is significant. This is because it tells them, when new thing comes in the market and also inform how much price this thing. This means that they can easily purchase personal items from shops and online. The result of this phenomenon could be that people will spend less energy in order to seeking those things. A further point in favour of this idea might be that it is a key source of time effective. Unless masses see adverts, they would spend more time to buy goods.
On the flip side, there are several negative effects of advertisement on people who are living below the red line. Firstly, when poor individuals to see expensive things on advert, they can not afford it. As a result, they will feel lonely, isolated and alienated, which in turn leads to personal problems, like as depression and alcoholism. The decision as to whether companies should not put sign boards in every corner of the streets must be seen in the context of the entire society.
To sum up, Buying goods is a topic which is very relevant to the contemporary society. However, I believe quite strongly that advertising has become an industry and also the back bone of the world economies. If government focus on these companies, it will be better for poor generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 356, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...depression and alcoholism. The decision as to whether companies should not put sign boards in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, as to, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9175257732 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68539496363 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4689903837 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121138990874 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364729159911 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326995936964 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694900873706 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00397305385111 0.056905535591 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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