Fossil fuels such as coal oil and natural gas are used in many countries The use of alternative sources of energy including wind and solar power is encouraged Is this trend is a positive or negative development | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Fossil fuels such as coal oil and natural gas are used in many countries The use of alternative sources of energy including wind and solar power is encouraged Is this trend is a positive or negative development

In the recent years,most of the people how become aware of the benefits of the alternative sources of energy such as wind and solar. Even though, fossil fuels are widely used these days the role that the renewable energy sources could play cannot be neglected. I agree with the point that the use of alternative energy sources should be encouraged.
Fossil fuels, no doubt,work faster than energy from the alternative sources. In spite of that,Daya prominent cause for environmental pollution and health problems. desh non-renewable agents of energy Amit the harmful gases such as carbon monoxide, nitric oxide and carcinogens. Resultantly the atmosphere becomes polluted with these substances emitted, which fedeli affect the health of humans. Where is health issues such as cancer, respiratory problems, skin disorders, allergies and the like will ensure your as pernicious effect of the usage of non renewable energy sources. Futher, most of the time the cost of the fossil fuels is unaffordable for the ordinary people. As a result of its limited availability, the cost of the most widely -used fossil fuels such as petrol, diesel and crude oil are increasing day by day. So, the people feel that the renewable energy sources are far better than this.
In addition to the above,renewable energy sources are more eco friendly and accessible as well. One of the main advantages of the alternative sources of energy is that it is ever renewable and sustainable. Thus, it can be utilised for a long period of time. Moreover, it has minimal impact on the environment. The wind turbine and the solar panels yes or no waste products. To cite an example,a few countries namely Poland and Japan mostly use the renewable energy sources instead of the fossil fuels,where buy these countries has succeeded in reducing the pollution rate and mortality rate associated with this. Other than that mostly solar panels can be placed in the open space near to the home, where adequate sunlight is available,which absorbs greenhouse gases and convert them into useful energy. Even though it takes a huge amount for its implementation, it provides life-long economical stability by reducing the cost incurred for the electricity and natural gas.
To sum up, while considering the benefits of renewable energy sources, I would open that it is much better than any of the fossil fuels. all the it is a fact that the fossil fuels will continue to be used and are unavoidable to some extent, it is definite that in the near future,renewable energy sources will come to take centre- stage and a vital role in our daily transactions as well as routine and habit activities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in addition, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, in spite of, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 440.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03409090909 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82151470808 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 730.8 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8138999721 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.476190476 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9523809524 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289830291577 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844054111262 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607257048535 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194778192096 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613157169694 0.056905535591 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in addition, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, in spite of, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments