A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
Students need to learn the fundamentals before entering college, therefore for most students, it is essential to study the same national cirriculum. However, for students who are outstanding and specilaizes in a certain field of study, it is important that the government put extra effort into teaching them so they could become someone of great use in the future.
As a student, it is imperative that they know the basic things so they can live independently and function normally after they enter society. Therefore, requiring students to study the same national curriculum ensures that the students know what they need to learn. For example, without learning mathematics, one cannot calculate properly whan purchasing goods. If one doesn't study law and moral of the society, they might violate it accidentally and even go astray.
In addition, it is an easier task for the government to organize the test for entering college since students study the same cirriculum. For the teachers, they will have a clear guide regarding what to teach in order to help their students through the test; while as for students, they won't have to worry that what they are studying isn't enough for dealing with the test due the vast amount of knowledge in the universe.
Some people may argue that if all students study the same cirriculum, it is a limitation of their creativity and intelligence. It is like a cage that breeds animals and forces them to go through the same routine. However, it is not feasible for every school to have different cirriculum that suits the different talents of each student. Various classes means hiring more teachers and requires more location for containing the students. Then the school would have to increase the budget and build larger campus. Since public schools are already struggling to earn money, and private school have a high fee that might scare parents away if the school tries to increase it, it is impossible for the school to do so.
Nevertheless, talented students should still be taken care of. They meant unlimited potential and is the hope for improvement of human beings. They should be sent to special schools meant for them, so that they are gathered and can learn from each other. Meanwhile, schools for most students woudn't have to spend extra money to find teachers for them.
In conclusion, it is important that most students undergo the same national cirriculum to ensure they learn the fundamentals. Meanwhile, students with special talents should be specially taken care of by providing specialized teaching enviornment.
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- TOEFL T P O 24 Integrated Writing Task 3
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Students need to learn the fundamentals ...
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Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome someone of great use in the future. As a student, it is imperative that they...
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Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they enter society. Therefore, requiring students to study the same national curr...
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Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... properly whan purchasing goods. If one doesnt study law and moral of the society, the...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e it accidentally and even go astray. In addition, it is an easier task for th...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ve to worry that what they are studying isnt enough for dealing with the test due th...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... amount of knowledge in the universe. Some people may argue that if all studen...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is impossible for the school to do so. Nevertheless, talented students should s...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...extra money to find teachers for them. In conclusion, it is important that most...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, while, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07547169811 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6727390774 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516509433962 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5026941043 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314542194654 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102578368576 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988044207501 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172047198961 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650207609061 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Students need to learn the fundamentals ...
^^
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome someone of great use in the future. As a student, it is imperative that they...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they enter society. Therefore, requiring students to study the same national curr...
^^
Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... properly whan purchasing goods. If one doesnt study law and moral of the society, the...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e it accidentally and even go astray. In addition, it is an easier task for th...
^^
Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ve to worry that what they are studying isnt enough for dealing with the test due th...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... amount of knowledge in the universe. Some people may argue that if all studen...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is impossible for the school to do so. Nevertheless, talented students should s...
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...extra money to find teachers for them. In conclusion, it is important that most...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, while, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07547169811 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6727390774 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516509433962 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5026941043 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314542194654 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102578368576 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988044207501 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172047198961 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650207609061 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.