The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause? What are the solutions to address those problems?
it is true that the gap between the rich and the poor people is becoming larger. several problems have resulted from this tendency and they should be tackled by a number of effective solutions from the government and people.
As poor people are more poverty and rich people are more wealthy, several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that the increasing poverty of poor people could cause the decreasing of the economic development of the country. Because nobody has enough money to buy the products from factories and stores, businesses must either sale off the price of items or run out of business, leading to the increasing number of unemployed people in the future. Another problem is the rampant crime rate. Without the means to get money through work, the poor could turn to crimes such as robbery, burglary, drug trafficking, assault.., which makes the ruin of the society.
Since such issues are serious, the government and people should take steps immediately to address these problems. The first solution should be done by the government, they ought to offer more job training for unemployment. Therefore, the number of poor people, whose main part are in lacking jobs or low-paid work status, would go down. The second measure would be the provision of better education at school and in society, especially in the slum areas and poor regions. this can be helped by many teachers and people in the community, it is necessary for young people to be aware about how serious it would be if they are offenders. Moreover, grants and scholarships should be donated to improve the standard of educate of poor people to give them chances to enter good schools, so that they can get good jobs with well paid in the future.
In conclusion, there are various negative consequences of the wide difference between people who are wealthy and poverty. I believe proper steps need to be taken to tackle these problems, not only by the government but also by individuals.
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- The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer What problems could this situation cause What are the solutions to address those problems 73
- The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer What problems could this situation cause What are the solutions to address those problems 73
- The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer What problems could this situation cause What are the solutions to address those problems 78
- The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer What problems could this situation cause What are the solutions to address those problems 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95252225519 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57914204533 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563798219585 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7804624106 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.266666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2930701327 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106564838122 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985357998671 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184817739142 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889985450888 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.