In recent years the number of crime committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing.
Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solution.
In this contemporary era, crime is omnipresent and it is the biggest issues for any nation. From last some years, it is a shocking situation because by crime adolescent have been being increased by crime. I will give some reason apart from that some solution.
To embark, there are massive causes to incline crime by youth. Firstly, on account of, unemployment, youngsters are trying to crime, because of high proportion. Apart from that they want Live luxurious life and fulfill their needs due to, they have not expenditure money they are attracting to do crime. Moreover, lack of education is playing a quintessential role to grow the crime industry. Owing to not awarness of proper knowledge in small fit; crime is proliferating by youngsters. To examplify, culprit of Tihar Jail annovce in interview they have done crime, to fulfill their dreams and live a sumptuous life.
Furthermore, it is some solution to decline a crime by youth. Government should provide more job to fall down crime rate . Apart from that business taikon ought to organise job fair for youngsters. In addition, government not also give loans to fulfill their dreams,but also take nominal rates. For an instance, government should open more ITI center - which are teaching a lot of practical skills: plumbing, carpentry and teach related to mechanical field.
To conclude, unemployment and lack of education are major factor of increasing crime rate vis-a-vis others sources, if government want decline crime rate it is sine-qua-non to take effective step related to employment.
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- In recent years the number of crime committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing Discuss this issue Give reasons and suggest some solution 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18253968254 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86195289646 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599206349206 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2601433192 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174381662737 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064519580652 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556693199074 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114087901502 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688736822095 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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