It is much more convenient to watch a movie on television or computer than buy a ticket and go to the cinema. In the nearest future the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
From the society creation forms of people entertainment have changed a lot of times. Few years ago, the best amusement for individuals or a group of people was associated with cinema, while today they prefer to watch films of their personal monitors. Although, I agree that going to the cinema is very exiting activity, I am convinced that the time of large screens passed.
On the one hand, going to the cinema is a whole event full of expectations. On the movie screen all special effects of fantastic films, detective stories or films about nature and space are demonstrated. A large-scale picture makes us empathize with the characters, get involved in the story, smile and cry with them. For example, many people choose cinema for their first romantic date where everyone relax while discussing the plot of a movie they have watched together. Hence, going to the cinema is a great way to break out of routine and spend time with close persons.
On the other hand, while the movie tickets price grows every year as everything in the market, watching films on TV or computer is stably cheap. Moreover, at home you exclude noisy neighbors in the auditorium that can ruin all the impression from the film and invite relatives and friends to separate the time of viewing for free. For instance, some people cannot leave their offspring at home and other adult viewers are forced to listen to a loud explanation of the plot to a child. Thus, the accumulation of unjustified expectations and irritation from disrespect for own space and interests reduces the number of adult cinema visitors every year.
Due to the reasons mentioned before, I believe that people will prefer watching films at home instead of going to the cinema and the number of cinema visitors will decrease significantly in the next 10 years , as the quality of the received pleasure does not match the declared ticket price, while home viewing eliminates most of the problems.
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...rease significantly in the next 10 years , as the quality of the received pleasure...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iewing eliminates most of the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89123867069 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59039471819 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570996978852 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5202596502 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.538461538 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179207179889 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641125512048 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499397239682 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11624926946 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278527404667 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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