Life is easier and more comfortable today than it was when your grandparents were children. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From generation to generation people expect contrast with their grandparents for many reasons. A theory exists that nowadays routine is easier and more comfortable than our grandparents used to have. I fully agree to this statement due to the reasons mentioned hereinafter.
Firstly, both of my grandparents are from poor families as almost 99% of the population of the former USSR. It means that they could not afford many comfortable things like beds, sofas, etc. Moreover, they had to work their own in order to survive and raise children. My granddad had to share his pair of shoes with his siblings because individual pairs would be too expensive. Thus, because most of the people during those days were poor, they could not afford many useful and comfortable things.
Secondly, a war is never positive memories either for a solder or for a civilian. It shows that during a war the lack of everything appears and people do everything to survive. In addition to that, The Big Brother is watching for everyone, and that is mentally tough to be under suspect every time. For example, my granddad, who was born some years before WW2, says that working on 5 jobs was easier than surviving during the war. Therefore, the WW2 was the hardest period for many people in their entire life.
Finally, nowadays life becomes easier and easier every second because of many engineers and scientists working hard. It means that today, people do not want to survive in the world, but to exist in it with all possible comfort abilities. Moreover, with modern technology people learnt how to automatize some processes from the past. For example, nowadays, if someone breaks a leg, instead of a simple stick, he can get a highly technological cybernetic leg. Hence, modern machineries help people to live an easier life.
All in all, I proved that my granny and my grandfather’s child hood was not easy at all because everyone was poor and because of the war. In addition to that, every second nowadays, people do something that will contribute and make life easier in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89204545455 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6054218738 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.3304360012 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173549228883 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532638610468 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503751713876 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100277565304 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040759123685 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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