You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear Mr Benson,
I am writing to express my interest in the upcoming project management seminar, which is going to take place in San Diego. My name is Fabia Julius and I have been working as a project manager for 5 years and I believe this seminar can help me gain more knowledge.
I came across the seminar in a sponsored ad on a social media site but was unable to find any dates. I request you to provide the date on which the seminar will be held so that I can make arrangements likewise. In addition, I would like to request you to provide details on the cost of registration, whether it includes accommodation as well as the topics that will be discussed in the seminar.
I would really appreciate if you could reply on abc@gmail.com or call to discuss on +00011112222. I eagerly look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Fabia Julius
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Benson, I am writing to express my interest in t...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you soon. Yours sincerely, Fabia Julius
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, look, really, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58974358974 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77207830805 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7647035701 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261122896417 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937840662716 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592788250607 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149896091844 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056335365404 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Benson, I am writing to express my interest in t...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you soon. Yours sincerely, Fabia Julius
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, look, really, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58974358974 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77207830805 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7647035701 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261122896417 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937840662716 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592788250607 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149896091844 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056335365404 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.