The chart below shows the amount of spent on six customer goods in four europen countries

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The chart below shows the amount of spent on six customer goods in four europen countries.

The bar chart illustrates the changes in amount of spent on six consumer goods in 4 different european countries (Germany,Italy,France and Britain).

İn britain people spent nearly 160 thousand pounds sterling for personal stereos,the highest amount of money for these goods among all other countries.And other countries peoples spent somewhat same amount of money for these goods at nearly 150 thousand pounds sterling.Similarly there is no significant differance between personal stereos and tennıs racquets expenditures in these countires.But when it comes to the perfumes britains people expenditures increase and reach excatly 160 thousand pounds sterling.

In comparison britains people expenditures are slightly over 160 thousand pounds sterling for cds.Similarly France surpass germany and ıtaly ın terms of cds expenditures,reaching just below britains expenditures.When it comes to the toys britains peoples expenditures increase ,approaching nearly 170 thousand pounds sterling.For these goods france and ıtaly peoples spent the same amount of money,reaching nearly 160 thousand pounds sterling.But France expenditures surpass 160 thousand pounds sterling for photographic films,just below the britains peoples expenditures for these goods.

O verall it is clear that britains expenditures are the highest proportion all among countries for each goods.But unlike other countires germanys people spent nearly identical amount of money for each goods.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.18536585366 4.92477711251 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41353292347 2.65546596893 129% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492682926829 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 22.4926829268 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.949700443 43.030603864 446% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 317.0 112.824112599 281% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.25 22.9334400587 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 1.69756097561 1708% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150097695812 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140274090645 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919147095366 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140274090645 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919147095366 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.3 13.2329268293 252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 61.2550243902 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 10.3012195122 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.51 11.4140731707 171% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.9970731707 204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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