2 weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and still it is not ready.
Write a letter to the shop complaining. Tell what has happened and how you feel.
Ask them to repair the radio very soon or supply you with a new radio.
Dear Sir,
I am Fujiwara Tsuyoshi, a resident of Akibhara. Recently, I bought a radio from local branch your Yoshida Electronics and Company, however, it was not malfunctioning and as a result of my complain, the shop received it back for repair. Yet despite a week being gone, I have heard no news about it.
The radio I bought belonged to latest generation of Toshiba company and its model number is 189546TOSH. Upon buying it, I inspected the radio and tried to play some FM channels but it did not work as I expected rather it was automaticlly switching channels and did not even pick up the frequency of some well known channels. As I discovered this, I informed one of your employees about the problem which lead me to current my issue. Even though, I was convinced that it will be repaired and delievered back within two or three days, forget about getting it back, I do not even know whether it has actually been repaired or not.
I tried asking the person in-charge but he keeps procrastinating and not telling me actual results. So, I am writing this letter to inform you about my complain and if it is possible to repair, please do so. Otherwise, supply me with a new one of similar type as a replacement.
Yours Sincerely, Date :- 7/3/2020
Fujiwara Time :- 9:59 AM
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...bout it. The radio I bought belonged to latest generation of Toshiba company and its m...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pe as a replacement. Yours Sincerely, Date :- 7/3/2020 Fujiwara ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Date :- 7/3/2020 Fujiwara Time :- 9:59 AM
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65350877193 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74196195953 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65350877193 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.216240163 44.8134815571 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 96.4545454545 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206657710297 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590022583585 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673004380767 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827094095307 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809135632997 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...bout it. The radio I bought belonged to latest generation of Toshiba company and its m...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pe as a replacement. Yours Sincerely, Date :- 7/3/2020 Fujiwara ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Date :- 7/3/2020 Fujiwara Time :- 9:59 AM
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65350877193 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74196195953 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65350877193 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.216240163 44.8134815571 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 96.4545454545 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206657710297 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590022583585 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673004380767 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827094095307 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809135632997 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.