some people tink that news has no connection with people's lives so it is a waste of time to read newspaper and watch television news programmes. Do you disagree or agree
It is true that many believe that news is irrelevant to their everyday life and ignore the importance of newspapers as well as broadcasts on television. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this notion.
It is myopic to say that news is not necessary as it merits each individuals and the society as a whole in important ways. In terms of individuals, the press alarms the public about upcoming or current threats such as outbreaks of diseases, dangerous criminal or natural disasters. The Vietnamese news broadcasts, for example, warn the public about the symptoms of the disease caused by the Covid-19, which helps the government in effectively contain the spread of this dangerous virus. Furthermore, news acts as a deterrent to unverified news. It is a source of trustworthy information and through broadcasts each individual can broaden their horizon as well as obtain the correct information about various hazardous events to remain calm and respond effectively to all issues. In many regions where natural disasters are common such as Tokyo or islands, people are well-informed of the safety procedures thanks to news broadcasts. From the perspective of society, modern news agents encourage and allow citizens make better decisions in choosing their authorities. As politics always appears on broadcasts, people are able to keep track with almost every action of their leaders and important people. Thus, the public can make better choices when voting for presidents or leaders. News agents in the USA are ample example of this case. Every statement and action of the candidates is strictly monitored and analyzed on news broadcasts and newspaper in order to help people choose the right president.
In conclusion, news is closely related to our lives and ensures our safety. Therefore, I would strongly disagree with the belief that news is not needed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21594684385 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83909932613 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564784053156 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2011069998 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217755875309 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784660925096 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526489977154 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155403324111 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240010613374 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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