Nowadays in some countries the numbers of children aged 15 and younger are increasing. What are the current and future effects of ever increasing population?
These days, parents try to have more babies to take care of them when they are old. Some countries will confront the overpopulation problem specifically children and teenagers. This essay will discuss the impacts of the rising population for the current and future world due to competition and natural resources and try to give some conclusions.
Because nowadays there are more and more young people, they have to compete with others in some situations, for example, they want to be in a well-known public school because it leads to perfect universities and job opportunities when they grow up. However, entrancing this school, it would not be easy so that they have to test and be ranked for their seats. Although there are many ways to choose intelligent young children including exams and showing their talents and skills, it can separate the right people from others for the right positions like it’s called Natural Selection. To sum up, although people are facing with the young overpopulation, colleges and universities will attain excellent students which suit them.
For future impacts, natural resources will run out unless they do not think of renewable energy and alternative technologies which means that since they were born, they have to deal as well as have the burden to solve these issues to live their lives whether they realize. However, if some countries are good luck enough or the governments invest much money on them, these new generations would make and develop the country in a better way and will launch some products and technology namely the cars that use solar energy instead of gasoline and diesel.
In conclusion, there are not only drawbacks for now and the future of increasing young members in the family. Those mentioned impacts also give positive sides that people should decide the appropriate choices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12211221122 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60695574103 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590759075908 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9897536113 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.090909091 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117956989749 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500670612077 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540023586521 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799334099065 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039536835082 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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