Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Learning a new language to stay in a new country is essential to migrate and settle. Staying in a country where people speak a new and different language can cause many problems. In my opinion, I totally agree without the knowledge of a foreign language will lead to serious issues which are discussed in this essay.
Firstly, idea on a new language is essential for any person to communicate in a foreign country. Every country in this world have their own medium to talk with each other.
This causes lot of issues in their daily life such as, a person will not be able to talk with the neighbour or share his/her thoughts with them. For Instance, buying groceries in the market where locals are uneducated and speak only in the local language. Though there are many devices to translate words for them but they lack accuracy. Another problem is during the transportation, people often commute using public transport unable to speak might end up travelling late to their offices. I strongly believe having an brief knowledge on new language helps a lot.
Secondly, people often feel boredom because they lack skills to talk. Precisely, people often feel they can spend time at parks in the evenings doing exercise, to greet any person it would be a tedious task for them. For Example, employees who work in different countries take their parents with them to stay along, they speak in their native language end up speaking with strangers. Attending language classes to understand the local medium helps a lot for any individual to talk. This helps in both practical and social life. Boredom
can cause serious problems as they lack skills to communicate.
To Conclude, I totally agree living in a country without knowledge on the local language might lead difficult circumstances in their daily life. Also
they feel boredom because of lack of skills to talk with strangers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92789968652 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52957661948 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507836990596 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9108211318 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250961853812 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829024836914 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561422786377 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13214183352 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555611810296 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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