Some people believe that it is best to accept a bag situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argur that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Life is difficult and unexpected. Today, you can be rich by winning the lottery, but you can lose everything like your job, money, or family the next day. When a bad situation occurs, some people may accept it and let it drive their life while others may fight against that bad. If something bad happened to me, I would choose the latter. I have been through more ups and downs than I can count so far in life. However, life has taught me to never give up in any circumstances no matter how bad it is. I say this from my experience. After graduating, I was recruited by a famous Japanese corporation, where many students dreamed to work at. Despite my dream job, I was shocked by the dynamic environment. I couldn’t catch up to the assigned work because I had lacked many skills. Every day became a nightmare. I would come home late feeling stressed, and I would miss a lot of social events. To top it all off, my girlfriend back then left me. I thought that nothing was going to change until one day I watched a speech done by Barack Obama accidentally. The speech encouraged me to invest in my weekend by learning and exercising. After a couple of months, I steadily caught up with the workload. Now, every time I look back, I see that dark time as a great lesson I’d never forget. In conclusion, I think there’s no victory without suffering. If a bad situation arises, it’s better to try to improve it than accepting it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, then, while, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44486692015 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62551864899 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673003802281 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3076247812 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.5263157895 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8421052632 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57894736842 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0997563180752 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248597845209 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565820491778 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997563180752 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.0946893788 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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