Some people are a broad interest in laying a foundation to an ideal society, whereas, they fail to achieve the goal. I think equality and freedom are two contributing factors for defining an ideal society, whilst, there are some ways to gain such a society.
In my opinion, equality is a determining factor when an ideal society is concerned. To put it differently, irrespective of citizens' race, religion and sex, they should benefit from equal opportunities in all aspects of their life such as in the job market and social rights. A good illustration of this is clearly delineated by women employment; most employers are reluctant to employ women due to discrimination and prejudice. This in turn breeds a sense of disapproval of women by the society. Freedom of expression is, furthermore, another pillar of an ideal society. This means that citizens are bound to criticize the government freely without getting a sentence.
With regard to mentioned-above in term of social betterment, there seem some ways to make an ideal society. One step would be creating a vision devoid of discrimination and full of equality which has to start from self-person. In most cases, society ends up failing to create an ideal society because individuals imagine these responsibilities could burden on the shoulder of other people and not self-person. Giving voice to the voiceless is highly likely to be another viable alternative a beacon of hope for millions of people suffering from keeping at bay and are disable to achieve their rights.
To conclude, I believe that being equal from all perspectives of human rights and freedom of expressing are both set to be a key illustration of a beau-ideal society which can be available through altering thoughts and ability to criticizing of the government.
- Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individuals to protect themselves Discuss both sides and give your opinion 44
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Some people think that the government should not give international aid since they have disadvantaged people like unemployment and homeless in their country To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- people should look after their health as a duty to the society where they live rather than their own benefits what extend do you agree or disagree 87
- Some people think competitive sports, such as football, are valuable because they can gather people with different ages and cultures together. Some think competitive sports can cause problems because people are from different groups and countries. Discuss 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disabled'.
Suggestion: disabled
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, whereas, as to, i think, such as, in most cases, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11186440678 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07850738166 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569491525424 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.13023961 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307529838127 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111867866056 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101506825921 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178115498087 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521804551122 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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