Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basic and a large number of children play computer games.
What are the positive and negative effects of playing computer games?
it is often said that children benefit from studying in boarding schools,especially in today's technology-focussed world.However,this issue is not entirely straightforward,and argument can also be made against the idea.this essay will discuss the data ,and give a concluding view.
On the one hand,those who support the boarding schools cite the various benefits that such schools can bring to a child. these range from improving knowledge , to becoming independent, and sociable.For example, make the bed , do laundry contribute to this stand of development, which adds greatly too a child's maturation. Another argument is that not all children live in a good condition to grow u, meaning that the child is effected by crimes, drugs, and domestic violences.
By contrast, opponents of this view point out that children and teenagers should be observed and cared by their family.Exemples can be seen in adolescence, when there are many changes in young person's body and mind. In addition, many children have to face with bullying at school due to such issue as depression or suicide. For these reasons,children would probably need to close with family, meaning that they need family connection.Finally, it must be said that not all students or pupils actually suitable for boarding schools, because they will have problems with mobility,or autism.For these students, boarding schools should not be excellent choice.
Overall, it seems advisable that the decision to study in a boarding school should be based on a student's interest, ability and family circumstances, rather than on a general view is " excellent option"for children.it would appear that this serves the situation of both students and family involved.
- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basic and a large number of children play computer games What are the positive and negative effects of playing computer games 11
- Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world especially among young people Identify the possible causes of this trend and propose solutions you think would be effective 56
- Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children while other people disagree for a number of reasons Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, however, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49063670412 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38641102128 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621722846442 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.8591533576 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.25 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.375 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0515029539058 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270721863187 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251419833177 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0278158298329 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180599245758 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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