The bar chart gives information about the total car sales in distinct geographical areas in the 2006-2010 period.
Overall, it is clear that European companies had the highest sales between 2006 and 2010, while the sales of South American companies was the lowest. Besides, the number of cars were sold in Europe had an increasing trend, compared to decreasing trend of North America at the same period.
In 2006, 35% of total cars were sold in Asia, which was higher than that of Europe, at only 25%. Nevertheless, after 4 years, the figure of Europe had a dramatic growth, to 50% in 2010, while the figure of Asia dropped to exactly 30% in 2010, in spite of a slight increase to 38% in 2008.
Although the number of cars was deliveried in North American market was higher than both Europe and South America, by 4% and 18%, the figure of North America constantly dropped from 2006 to 2008 and become the lowest one in 2010, at only 9%. In contrast, although South America experienced a significant decrease in 2007 and 2008, the total car sales of this area recovered to 11% in 2010.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t only 25%. Nevertheless, after 4 years, the figure of Europe had a dramatic grow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, nevertheless, so, while, in contrast, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64766839378 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43045501919 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538860103627 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3359342991 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.142857143 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285031490897 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150627117296 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855268414647 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203002608108 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760167653302 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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