The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to Increase the price of fuel
With the increase of population the use of crude oil is raising in their daily lives which is affecting the environment. To overcome such problems people deem that the authority should raise the prices which might be helpful, but I disagree with this statement because state will face a lot of consequences and it may strike the economy
To begin with, nowadays globe is facing the speeded adjustment of prices, which have deterred reaction from people because the prices of fuel have both direct and indirect relation to goods. If the price raised up so automatically the goods and transport will be expensive because all the industries are running on fuel for instance, in my own country (Pakistan) the electricity is produced from kerosene if the petrol gets high so the electricity also get expensive.
Secondly, it can have a negative effect on the economy of a country due to which a country can fall apart. A region always relies on the taxes so these people don’t pay taxes fairly and even they are not willing to build business due to high expenditures of goods and labours. For example, in my home people are not in the mood to pay taxes to the regime neither they construct business centres. Furthermore, it can affect the revenue which is collected on highways from people because fewer people will ride.
In conclusion, it is not a sustained solution because it can hurt the feelings instead of that the government should make cell or solar cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsequences and it may strike the economy To begin with, nowadays globe is facing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81349206349 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60265129758 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.8848555838 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.625 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0863124381481 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320659098506 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431199496413 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507991937211 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518770896967 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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