Why do some people who leave school early are more successful compared with those who complete their studies. Reasons why they are more successful and what is required to be successful?
There are cases where, individuals who left their studies at early age have done better in life and are more prosperous, while those who finish formal education are comparatively less successful. There are numerous reasons behind the success of these less educated people, which will be discussed further along with other traits required to have a successful life.
The predominant reason of having a luxurious life despite of lack of education is hard work and failure at early age. People who are not able to gain formal education have to do strenuous work at the young age and many a time they are not able to succeed and have to face the unfortunate time. As we all know that failure is stepping stone to success so they release the value of money at very young age and ultimately work hard in life with full dedication and turnout as successful business persons. For example, many eminent business persons like Bill gates of Microsoft and Dhiru Bhai Ambani of Reliance have make huge empires although they are not that education, but they have gain every thing by the hard work and real life experience.
Moving further, the major qualities required to achieve success in life are strong will power, good communication skills and risk taking capacity. Those who have strong will power can achieve any thing in life and are able to come up from the any failure in the journey of success. In addition to this, people’s skill plays the ideal role, individuals who are able to communicate well can easily control the work force working under them and are able to gain more assignments from this competitive market. In order to succeed in life taking calculative risk also plays the vital role, it is an old saying no risk no gain. If any body wants to achieve any thing huge in life risk taking capacity is paramount for their progress in life.
In conclusion, unequivocally many individuals have achieved many things in life although they are not having that academic qualification, but other qualities and their hard work helped them to achieve their dreams. However, many graduates have not achieved that success it is all because lack of skills in them which are essential along with formal education
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87037037037 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49788270129 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489417989418 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.6044140281 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.615384615 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0769230769 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21882862914 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088951191962 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063668717459 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15533820427 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863978080871 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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