Some parents believe that cell phones are harmful for children, while others disagree. Discuss both side of view and give your opinion.
Nowadays, to have a cell phone has become more common between children, and parents are divided in their opinion regarding the benefits and drawbacks about this question. While some parents believe that mobile phones represent a bad impact to health and behavior of kids, others support the view that this gadget can help children to keep in touch with them or their friends and also contributes to entertainment and academic use. From my point of view, this kind of technology is good for kids but only if parents create balanced rules of use.
First, is clear that the intensive use of cell phone is negatively affecting children. Not only is obesity due to the sedentary routine on screens turning children less healthier, but also the decreasing of sleep. Many research suggest that kids spend most of their time on cell phones than in other activities such as sports and outdoor games what contribute to their poor health. Besides that, many times parents avoid give to children cell phones because depending on their maturity level, they can practice or suffer cyberbullying what brings risks to their emotional and social health.
On the other hand , despite this negative points some parents believe that the positive aspects outweigh the harmful issues of cell phones such as the possibility to always be in touch with their kids, specially in emergency situations or same allow more social contact from them with their peers and relatives. Moreover, a lot of apps for educational purposes are being created and children can use this kind of solution to learn in an easiest way and develop their academic performance or personal knowledge.
Concluding, both sides need to be considered when to give a cell phone for a kid, but in my opinion, if parents control how children use their cell phones and how many time they spend on them, the advantages are bigger than the negative aspects.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 454, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and academic use. From my point of view, this kind of technology is good for kids...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less healthy'?
Suggestion: less healthy
...ary routine on screens turning children less healthier, but also the decreasing of sleep. Many...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: Much research; A good deal of research
...hier, but also the decreasing of sleep. Many research suggest that kids spend most of their t...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
... the decreasing of sleep. Many research suggest that kids spend most of their time on c...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and social health. On the other hand , despite this negative points some paren...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...n use this kind of solution to learn in an easiest way and develop their academic ...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...red when to give a cell phone for a kid, but in my opinion, if parents control ho...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
... children use their cell phones and how many time they spend on them, the advantages are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00628930818 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48608513415 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559748427673 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7236839511 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.2 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325062939654 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130763752666 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675682209571 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211039861856 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563465945639 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 454, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and academic use. From my point of view, this kind of technology is good for kids...
^^
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less healthy'?
Suggestion: less healthy
...ary routine on screens turning children less healthier, but also the decreasing of sleep. Many...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: Much research; A good deal of research
...hier, but also the decreasing of sleep. Many research suggest that kids spend most of their t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
... the decreasing of sleep. Many research suggest that kids spend most of their time on c...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and social health. On the other hand , despite this negative points some paren...
^^
Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...n use this kind of solution to learn in an easiest way and develop their academic ...
^^
Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...red when to give a cell phone for a kid, but in my opinion, if parents control ho...
^^
Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
... children use their cell phones and how many time they spend on them, the advantages are ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00628930818 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48608513415 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559748427673 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7236839511 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.2 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325062939654 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130763752666 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675682209571 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211039861856 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563465945639 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.