Dear Mrs Anderson’
I’m Sarah, the next door neighbor that maybe you don’t know me because I have just moved to your neighborhood.
The issue is that my friends and I have decided to hold a part for my new job position at the backyard that is close to your living room doors. Furthermore, we may play some kind of music and have dancing programs, and at the end celebration we will light fireworks as an ending program.
I have heard about your kindness, and I’m really very eager to meet you as soon as possible. I want to send you an invitation for my party and it will be my pleasure to see you. However, I don’t dedicate a special date for holding my party, therefore, I kindly want you that set a day and a time duration for party that if you can not be able to come the sounds and noises don’t bother you on that day. I will be very happy to see you during my party and I apologize you in advance if noises will bother you.
With loves and regards
Your new neighbor
Sarah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h loves and regards Your new neighbor Sarah
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32631578947 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32964753079 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6179151114 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291751116497 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13669593282 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454331752847 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108466278956 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958952024144 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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