Many doctors say that people in todays world do not do enough phsical excercise.what do think the causes of this?what solution s are there to solve tthis problem?
Several Physicians observe that a major portion of populace do not indulge themself in physical excercise.Even thought with dawn of technological era the human beings are blessed with countless amenities which has paved the path of inactive lifestyle, still the awareness compaigns by supremacy are impeccable solutions which can bring this menace under absolute control.
Advancement in technology has welcomed the sedentary lifesytle which do not let the individual to channelized their energy into some physical activities.Seemingly, the widespread usage of technology has saved the human efforts and made them inactive by endowing them numerous breakthroughs.Consequently, these modern facilties have made man sulgish and phsical efforts are replaced by machines. Also it is biased to overlook the fact stated by WHO that electronic appliances at kitchen have trimed the physical efforts of ladies and turned them quite sluggish. therefore, wide availability of modern equipments and devices in the contemporary era have made the life easy but it has reduced the physical work.
Probing to the next question, to get quaint the commoners with the financial cost and economic cost of being unhealthy owing to lack of physical excercise would work as a motivational factor for them.The educational campaigns embarked by authorities would be conductive in apprising to folks about the importance of physical excercise in the life .To exemplify , the announcement of the benefits of exercise in FInland by the state has forced the localates to follow a particular excercise regimes and this trend has reduced the innumerable diseases among them.
In conclusion, although it is quite arduous for common man to leave the sedentary lifestyle and follow the active lifestyle, the awareness by the official would definitely help the citizenry to curb this dormant living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, so, still, therefore, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61188811189 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29276957281 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.52926135 49.4020404114 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 267.5 106.682146367 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.6666666667 20.7667163134 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0872180514607 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356019990776 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304736904535 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0310915949791 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029384491928 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.8 13.0946893788 220% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.85 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.54 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.5 9.78957915832 342% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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