Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of cars than advantages. Do you agree or disagree
It is argued that cars have more negative consequences than positive ones. I do agree with this statement. First, this essay will discuss diseases caused by cars and secondly, bring up cars have a big effect on the road.
It is obvious that cars are one of the most reasons for air pollution, which affects the biosphere and animals, but above all, it brings about humans diseases, especially respiratory systems, and diseases related. A recent statistic of the Ministry of Health shows that with the development of cars, the rate of respiratory diseases has increased significantly, particularly in children and pregnant women.
Cars also have an impact on urbanization. When there are more and more buildings, projects or places are established, they will invade many lands and, as a result, roads will be narrowed. It becomes more contradictory that cars are more, too. And it becomes a nightmare for people when they are congested for hours on the roads in rush hours, which causes irritation. My neighbor, who works for a company in Hanoi, said that so many cars in unwidened roads are so uncomfortable and annoyed. From that, the government should come up with more solutions to this issue by producing more public transports and bring in-laws to this problem.
In conclusion, cars bring on many problems to human lives and interfere in the modernization of many places, especially cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08225108225 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84429091643 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.424961083 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181948712104 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775577287477 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587979784945 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100701249062 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727053047406 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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