four-day work in the week is a good idea for increasing the profits of companies
The reading passage state that, four-day work in the week is a good idea for increasing the profits of companies. However, the professor in the lecture casts doubt on the points expressed in the passage.
First, the reading consider that fewer hours work is so effective and increase the performance of employees and reduce the rate of errors, in contrast, the professor contradicts the idea and further explains that the prototype with this view can not make cost less and also, this idea needs more money as an additional cost like training, medicine, off space, etc.
Second, the reading claims that decrease in the incoming of employees can help to remain money spend for hiring more staff admittedly, the speaker justified the information presented in the article and make the point that this idea is unpleasant for workers because they probably think it is not fair and in this atmosphere, efficiency will fall.
Third, the author in reading puts forward that the idea can reduce the rate of unemployment in society, on the other hand, the speaker validates the point and adds that this approach has some risks and maybe its harm be more than its advantage and also this idea force some costs for the supervision on the employees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...lains that the prototype with this view cant make cost less and also, this idea need...
^^^^
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to remain' or 'remain'.
Suggestion: to remain; remain
...e in the incoming of employees can help remaining money spend for hiring more staff admit...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 208.0 270.72406181 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94230769231 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50042525969 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581730769231 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 21.2450331126 193% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.659175794 49.2860985944 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 205.6 110.228320801 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.6 21.698381199 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06452816374 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265116523496 0.272083759551 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176933116766 0.0996497079465 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.22682644448 0.0662205650399 343% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180176606328 0.162205337803 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162609079234 0.0443174109184 367% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 13.3589403974 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 53.8541721854 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.0289183223 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.26 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.498013245 175% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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