Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important job security, while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
More opine that people should seek a job which provides them with a stable gross salary, rather than a fulfilled job. However, I strongly believe that you cannot stay a long time at one particular position if you do not find your occupation suitable for yourself.
I admit that job security is one of the elements which cultivate stability in human life. First and foremost, a long term position can provide employees with a stable gross salary which they can use to support their present life and save for their retirement, therefore, prevent them from fretting about bills and debts. By stop worrying, employees will concentrate on their career trajectory. Not only staffs but also businesses can benefit from job security, which the rate of turnover will decrease and the productivity will improve. Hence, employers can enhance their brand that can attract and retain talents.
However, I advocate the idea that employee satisfaction should be given priority instead of a permanent job. From an individual's strength perspective, your stable monthly paycheck does not mean your actual happiness, so if a person does not pursue their dream jobs, they cannot develop their metier. For example, there are many graduated students decide to become a teacher because their parents said that it was a safe job without considering their real qualification. Therefore, many people have to struggle with being patient with children or conveying knowledge effectively because these skills are not their strength. From the businesses' sake perspective, recruiting a talent pool who can think outside the box will help the employer launching many creative campaigns and enhancing their brand.
In conclusion, although both job satisfaction and job security play an important role in the development of an individual as well as a business, I strongly believe that enjoyment in a career should be considered first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ity instead of a permanent job. From an individuals strength perspective, your stable month...
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Line 5, column 633, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'businesses'' or 'business's'?
Suggestion: businesses'; business's
...skills are not their strength. From the businesses sake perspective, recruiting a talent p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28289473684 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75894886192 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621710526316 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1590824224 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.538461538 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228523216366 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844792673346 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858983732068 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163320426113 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735573656964 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.