Agriculture Industry is the backbone of economy of may countries across the globe and it is true to the large extent. Although, there are may substantial improvement in agriculture productivity, many pockets of the world still suffers shortage of food supply especially developing countries. This essay will elaborate the cause and possible solution to improve global supply chain management for food.
One of the main reason for scarcity of the food is deficiency in government policies like higher export/import tariff and duties which makes it unviable for farmer to export food to other country in-spite of glut in the market. This results into foods, grains going off due to lower shelf life. Moreover, developed countries to protect interest of their own farmers allows more subsidy which provides disincentive to developing world where government can't sustain huge subsidy bills. Even if, government agencies provide foods at subsidies rate, but due to poor infrastructure and lack of connectivity has resulted into food damage before reaching it to the poor people. Although, now a days, benefits of using advanced , mortised equipment, effective irrigation system are off set by vagaries of nature like heavy rain, hurricane, drought, erratic rain pattern due to global worming which damages the standing crops. It puts extra burden on government coffer.
To overcome these challenges government and world trade organisation (WTO) should work jointly on global supply chain. Developed countries should not waste the food and make people educate about the importance of food. Government should not impose high duties on imports to protect inefficiencies of domestic market. Like India had imposed high import duty on dairy products which were imported from Newzeland at low cost. Over and above, government should augment food storage capacity and improve method of storage for long shelf life of the food. This will help underdeveloped to countries to prepare themselves to protect and fight against the scarcity in the unforeseen events. Sustained supply due to these measures will eradicate malnutrition issues among the many developing countries.
To recapitulate, there are many small and effective initiative aforementioned will help many countries particularity developing and developed in general to reach a stage where country can claim self-sufficiency as far as food is concern.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, still, in general, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53804347826 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89292568673 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595108695652 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8936502605 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.882352941 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104744060193 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362255616149 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350871076352 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713164743727 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266506141028 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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