Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn’t write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Begin your letter as follows: Dear __________
Thank you so much for your letter and these lovely photos of the Bathinda trip. I am extremely sorry for writing late because I went for a business trip and return today only and I got the letter lying in mail box.
Looking at the photos of the holiday which we spent together bring back lots of the memories and the wonderful hospitality you extended to me. You mother is such a sweetheart, she taught me about different recipes that I can easily make for my breakfast when I told her that, I mostly leave for the office without having any meal in the morning. I had a great holiday at you home and a humble thank you for such a lovely time.
After looking at these photos an idea came to my mind, I know you always wanted to spend time in Canada. Why don’t you plan a trip to Canada next week as holidays are approaching? I will take two weeks off from my job. I would be very happy if you can make it.
Thank you again for the unforgettable memories you gave me. Looks forward to hearing from you now.
Warm Wishes,
Kiran
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30456852792 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22202867335 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644670050761 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0087138525 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6666666667 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389034402835 0.216113520407 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140854198678 0.0766984524023 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972955619911 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235073691215 0.12726935374 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040473526938 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.