4. The environment problems facing today’s world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situations. Government and large companies should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Humankind is confronted with various environmental problems. It is widely believed that the impacts caused to the environment are so severe that an individual is unable to solve and only governments and enterprises can mitigate the damage. I personally disagree with this statement.
On the one hand, it is apparent that we are dealing with massive environmental issues with elevating scale. For example, water contamination resulting from the manufacturing process of industrial companies has led to vast deaths of marine lives. With such severe damage, it is understandable that a solitary person is incapable of handling. Therefore, the government should be responsible for alleviating these impacts by imposing strict control and punishment on enterprises who violate the environmental protection laws. I opine that these two parties are jointly accountable for solving environmental problems.
On the other hand, each person also plays an essential role in alleviating the environmental damage by applying the rules of reduce, reuse and recycle. For example, everyone should cut down on their daily water usage or utilization of private vehicles during rush hours. These acts can help us avoid clean water scarcity when draughts come or reducing air pollution in the metropolis. I believe that such small and simple acts done by a solitary person can result in positive effects on the environment if they are carried out by a large community. Therefore, it is convincing that ordinary citizens can contribute to resolving environmental problems.
In conclusion, I am against the statement that a single person cannot deal with environmental issues. While it is true that cooperation between government and companies are pivotal to mitigating the impacts, individuals can also devote by taking small but powerful actions. I believe if everyone joins hands to solve these problems, it is possible that our future generations can live in better environmental conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51973684211 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14552814312 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9654147357 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157735942304 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457765350668 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453783732485 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935076451083 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274263694907 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.