5. There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development.
Nowadays, the availability of digital technology with affordable price have offered us a more convenient yet efficient lifestyle. Telecommuting and tele-education, which are remarkable advances, are gaining soaring popularity amongst schoolers and office staffs. I believe this is a positive trend and I shall provide evidence to support my opinion.
Firstly, an apparent merit of working or studying from afar is associated with the economic aspect. By staying at home, individuals can save money spent on travelling back and forth between workplace and home. This vast amount of money can instead be invested on personal interests or textbooks, which are sometimes expensive for students. Secondly, tele-schooling or telecommuting may open socioeconomic doors for talented individuals who live in remote areas and unable to come and work in big, developed cities. Because urban areas offer greater employment opportunities and better educational system, people from underdeveloped regions cannot have equal chances to enjoy these facilities as others. With the utilization of computer technology, people can now study and work in conducive conditions which is equal to urban citizens even though they are far away.
However, working or learning from home can have their demerits in terms of work efficiency. Because people stay at home where there is an absence of supervisors, they tend to neglect their assignments at hand and do other personal tasks during work hours. This results in reductions of work efficiency and productivity. Nevertheless, this problem can be solved by setting progress goals for workers and pupils, as well as implement strict punishment if their tasks are incomplete by the deadline. These acts would provide incentives for people working from afar and guarantee effective performance.
In conclusion, I believe telecommuting and tele-schooling bring us a positive development. These options are economically efficient and they offer better employment and educational opportunities for people from remote areas. Despite having a demerit regarding the potential low working performance, this problem can be solved by setting progress goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71384615385 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13382160785 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603076923077 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1653533485 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.235294118 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21506323136 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061897815587 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368971401756 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114973744449 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334398747724 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.