Today, must people prefer online shopping instead go out and buy something in stores. This essay will take at the positive aspects these shopping can have and also the negative effects on online shopping.
The are several reasons for online shopping. The first reason people can stay at home and buy something they want so traffic and air pollution could be less and weather could be better. They can stay home and spend much more time with family. The second reason people could save time if they are shopping online because search about online shopping are more easier than search in the story. The theird reasons, they can buy every thing even they don’t have in their city.
However, shopping online has negative effects. When people prefer shopping online some little stories could be close. The second reason, some shoppers could cheat and sales wrong materials .
Overall, the both sides of this issue had considered, however the positive aspects seem to outweigh the negative effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e and buy something they want so traffic and air pollution could be less and weat...
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...ld save time if they are shopping online because search about online shopping are...
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...theird reasons, they can buy every thing even they don’t have in their city. Ho...
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...eem to outweigh the negative effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 41.998997996 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 165.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03863823918 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2970862469 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281041852939 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12953587822 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128681931858 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190874791395 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088744233093 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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