With the development of the societies and also with the increase in the world population through the last decades, nowadays we are faced with more fundamental problems and if we do not find appropriate solutions for them, they would become harder and more detrimental in future. In fact, I am not very hopeful these kind of important problems can be solved in near future and in our life time.
I feel this way because of some reasons which I will explorer in the following essay:
First of all, as all we know one of the most important and fundamental problems is environmental issues such as air pollution or contamination in river. It is more than a decade that today’s world has these problems and all people are aware of the harmful consequences of the mentioned phenomena. But unfortunately any sever action has not been done for these kind of problems yet. For example, about the air pollution, every day a huge amount of CO2 and other toxic gases are released to the atmosphere by factories and cars which are causing the global warming and other harmful happening.
But we can see that factories and companies are thinking only about their own benefits and no body concerns or care about the environment and while all the countries around the world do not come to an practical unanimity about the declining their production lines, not only this situation will not get better, but also it goes to be worse.
Furthermore, another fundamental problem is the lacking of the water resources all around the world. According to the last data, the amount of precipitation has declined a lot everywhere and also today the ground water reservoirs do not contain adequate water. For solving this problem, governments should use many scientific and practical methods for the improvement of the all procedures which are related to water channels. For example they have to allocate enough budget for this issue and charge the farmers to improve their infrastructures but unfortunately it seems that this issue is not a priority in their planning.
To draw my conclusion, as I mentioned above, today we are faced with many sever and fundamental problems such as environmental issues and lack of water resources but unfortunately I do not think these kind of problems be solved through our life time because nowadays money is more important than every things and people mostly are thinking about their own financials benefits.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Environmental issues are too complex to be handled by the individual 78
- Nowadays food has become easier to prepare Has this change improved the way people live Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Some parent offer their school age children money for each high grade mark they get in school Do you think this is a good idea Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 65
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, i feel, in fact, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9681372549 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79558677407 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497549019608 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.0696902556 48.9658058833 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.916666667 100.406767564 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.6045352989 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259469374512 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973784099435 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784322373521 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12778533338 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639827339932 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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