I believe, in today’s world people's perspectives on their choice of clothing, has a lot to do with the changing trends and comfort level. Traditional wear is now passé, which use to be a daily outfit as in the olden days. A shift from traditional wear to modern similar wear reflects a positive change in society.
Many people migrate to different lands for work or to settle, so when one follows a similar clothing trend, the person easily gels in the new community, as the saying "When in Rome, do as the Romans". It helps them to look similar to others in their society, irrespective of their culture, region, religion and thereby, encouraging unity in diversity. Most of the people would like to be a part of the trend and the global community unless someone is personally interested in traditional clothes. Since it is common similar wear, so they can be easily manufactured and in bulk in no time with the use of the latest technology.
Persons wearing jeans and T-shirts might not be so attached and aware of their ancestral traditions and history, as compared, to someone still following traditional wear. After all, it is a matter of personal choice and interest. The traditional wear depicts the culture of a region, which they inherited from their ancestors. The traditional attire's are not easily manufactured, due to different old techniques to be used, for example, a Japanese Kimono, which is hand-crafted.
Thereby, concluding this new trend of wearing similar clothing over traditional ones is here to stay.
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A fun variation of the…
A fun variation of the multiplayer knockout game genre that is well-liked by young people today is stumble guys. Stumble Guys, an action spin-off of the well-known game Fall Guys, with gameplay that is quite similar to that of the original while also featuring many intriguing upgrades. Stumble Guys offers you thrilling and compulsively engrossing knockout matches with a variety of obstacles and stages. 32 players can participate online at once in this game. The multiplayer mode allows you to play with pals while battling your way through levels as the mayhem intensifies. All you have to do to win is keep command of the last character standing.
Characters in stumble guys online can alter their skin tone, facial features, and expression to suit players and provide interest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...l. Traditional wear is now passé, which use to be a daily outfit as in the olden da...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, after all, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00389105058 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91167603767 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571984435798 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6436922809 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322261869778 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11576314898 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571460631679 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203350363117 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495407335894 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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