Well, in my opinion, many people would agree that to get a good job, one needs to attain and earn a university education.
Do we think formal education bears no importance? For a job, people with good degrees stand an excellent chance above the ones without it. Formal education helps to back a strong background to apply for academic-related jobs. For example, for jobs in sectors of law, medicine or teaching and so on, a proper associated degree in the same field is the most desirable factor for consideration. That’s the reason, there is rising competition in universities for good degrees, and by each passing year, you have various courses adding up to cater to the undying need of the evolving career market.
On the contrary, some people consider the development of soft-skills and experience is more valuable than formal studies. In my view, soft skills such as leadership skills and other interpersonal skills along with relevant inline experience would help the candidate to perform in businesses once they are aboard, without further delays by spending time in training, thereby proving an asset to the company.
Knowledge from basic level to advanced and experience helps one to track down the root cause of a problem and resolve all the areas of the issue with ease, collectively they are interdependent. But, as we also know, nowadays to be an expert in businesses too you are preferred with a master's degree to excel.
We may conclude, university education will have a significant reliable foothold over mere soft skill development and experience, to get hold of a good job and to excel in their career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, for example, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02573529412 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86739959339 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9272572138 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.272727273 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254997471322 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921201404674 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722704412726 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138916968502 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679950984553 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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